People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge)
There is no doubt that university is the golden gate for students to real life. People mainly go to school for academic reasons, to gain the minimum amount of knowledge that would prepare them for future jobs. However, there are for sure many other reasons that people go to university after the finish high school.
first of all, Since we are in the twenty first century and it's getting more competitive for good vacancies,
people believe that having a bachelor degree in a specific field is valuable as self achievement as well as an addition to their CV for jobs application. For example, if a bank owner wants to hire some people for a job, he would prefer to hire bachelor degree holders more than high school graduates because he knows that bachelor degree holders received more experience and knowledge at their college years than high school graduates.
Second, going to college give them the chance to meet new people either teacher or students and learn from them. This social interaction could help later on with their connections for future business or favors. For example, Steve jobs met his colleagues at college and they exchanged knowledge at the campus which later helped them when they founded their own company. That's why going to college is crucial for your social life and personal connections. This consequently help with career and life in general advancement.
finally, attending college or university will ease the way to after graduate studies. For example, I majored in American literature but took psychology classes as minor which helped me after college graduation when I wanted to make a career shift and be psychologist. It was easier to me to understand the subjects and decrease my total credit hours because of my previous knowledge. This means that going to college broaden your options when you don't like your job and want to change your career path.
In conclusion, going to the university is a crucial life experience one shouldn't miss in their life. I believe it the opportunity should be available to everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, no doubt, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9652173913 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56430180991 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559420289855 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5028749339 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339919578896 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10473858056 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673340339354 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154134423052 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916877273135 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.