People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In today's world education is the most important necessity. All parents send their children in schools and universities for good education. So they can make their career and life more successful. There are various skill which an individual can learn in university which will be included in below mentioned essay.
The most important think which I feel is more challenging for any person is to place their opinion in front of other people. This habit can be inculcated if you are socialize person. For Instance, university is the best place to practice this sort of activities because there are different team involvement activities which will help us to communicate with one another. This can be explain with an example, right for my childhood I was always sent to school and high school in the same place where I currently live and that was the reason I was too shy and depended person I don't use to communication with any other person, but as soon as I join university for my graduation program I started travelling and meeting different people along with that I got an opportunity to learn different thing which I was not aware of this help me a lot to develop .
In university we all know that education is most important key which you will acquire, but there are various different event like sport, art etc. in which you can participate . This activities help us to get involve in various other event and make us involved in different things other than studies. For example, I love playing badminton so we have good badminton court in our campus for playing badminton .When we have vacation I often go there to spend some time in order to get relax for the frustrated schedule of exam. University is the most important place where you can not only study,but also get time to refresh you mind.
So there are multiple activities which are most important for students to get more involved in university. Which will give good experience along with that help us to become more strong and capable for future, because as we know anything cannot be learn within short period for time it take daily involvement and efforts to achieve goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in short, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7628032345 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60535470233 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.641049584 48.9658058833 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.8 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168780783483 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585316392249 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342138570744 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104508319012 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314726435587 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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