Sydney Operra house task

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Sydney Operra house task

The reading and the lecture are both about Sydney Opera House, which is used for international competition.The author of the reading believes that for dramtic construction of Jorn Utzon many efforts are required because , the structure is very unique. The structure looks different from each and every corner of the building. The lecturer casts doubts on the claims made in the article. She thinks that scullpture should adpat in very situation and they have decide to build roof as curved structure of sailing ship.
First of all, the author point out that when this template was select that time all factors were not consider, so it will take more time for construction. It is mentioned that pervious building the model was and effective task, but eventually the process seem to be more difficult. The point is challenged by lecturer that even thought the task is difficult the output generated will be overwhelming.She thinks the construction is imaginative architecture form. Furthermore, she argues It is not only beautiful art form but also unique all over the world.
Secondly, the passage assert that construction of roof is the most tedious task for the workers.It states that there are many sort of measurement which we need to consider of proper art form. The lecturer rebuts it is difficult but the best thing if achieve. She says that it us the combination of art, architecture, Engineering and Technology. This would not only fit perfectly but also look ascetic.
Finally, the author establishes that this will be extra-ordinary art piece for 20th century. The best construction found all over the world and people will always remeber the efforts taken by the team of people to build this.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading and the lecture are both about Sydney Opera Hous...
^^
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...h is used for international competition.The author of the reading believes that for...
^^^
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Utzon many efforts are required because , the structure is very unique. The struc...
^^
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...are required because , the structure is very unique. The structure looks different from eac...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...because , the structure is very unique. The structure looks different from each and...
^^^
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... each and every corner of the building. The lecturer casts doubts on the claims mad...
^^^
Line 1, column 461, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'decided'.
Suggestion: decided
...d adpat in very situation and they have decide to build roof as curved structure of sa...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...s select that time all factors were not consider, so it will take more time for construc...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
...e output generated will be overwhelming.She thinks the construction is imaginative ...
^^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...s the most tedious task for the workers.It states that there are many sort of meas...
^^
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sort seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sorts'.
Suggestion: many sorts
...or the workers.It states that there are many sort of measurement which we need to conside...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sorts'?
Suggestion: sorts
...e workers.It states that there are many sort of measurement which we need to conside...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, sort of, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05673758865 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83402359644 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3672341033 49.2860985944 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0608957835217 0.272083759551 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176807377773 0.0996497079465 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284880433317 0.0662205650399 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0325029977212 0.162205337803 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209898088032 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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