People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
For some people travelling inside the country is more favorable than going overseas.
However, in my opinion, trips to other countries have more advantages for individuals. I feel this way for three reasons: it broadens a person's horizons, provides an opportunity to develop intercultural skills, and even inspires to learn new languages.
First and foremost, through exploring other countries a person may broaden his or her mind. Traveling overseas allows us to acquire knowledge about different cultures, and get the experience of visiting the famous landmarks that definitely have a positive impact on a person's way of thinking, as, for example, it is believed that travelling may develop imagination. In addition, people can try various cuisines, thus letting them discover new recipes.
Secondly, while travelling abroad a person can meet new friends from cultures different from theirs and thus develop intercultural skills through communication with them. Due to globalization, when a lot of companies hire people from different countries and that have various cultural backgrounds, such skills not only become of high demand by the companies, but can also help one to adapt in a diversified corporate life.
Finally, travelling overseas can improve the existing level of the foreign language or even encourage one to learn a new one. Drawing from my personal experience, the trips to english-speaking countries helped me overcome the language barrier that I had before. Being in the situation when nobody understands you forces you to start speaking the foreign language no matter how shy or anxious you may feel. Besides, a visit to another country may introduce you to a language that this country speaks. You may hear how it sounds, find it appealing, and wish to learn it.
In conclusion, even though travelling inside their own country may be beneficial for a person, I personally believe that traveling outside of it provides more for at least three reasons that I mentioned above: it may broaden one’s mind, develop skills and motivate to learn new or improve their knowledge of other languages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, at least, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3115727003 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91956464954 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563798219585 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.5538325215 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.45110844103 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328726021293 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112825252645 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876581288669 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185149066036 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834554922056 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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