People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that travel is one of the utmost important activities among people that they are willing to do. In fact, travel is one of the basic needs of human beings that help them to discover and get acquaintance with myriads of matters. Stemming from this fact, a relevant question that is a moot point is whether traveling inside the country is more beneficial or going to overseas countries. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that traveling whether inside or outside will definitely help individuals to view life differently. The following reasons will aptly substantiate my personal stance.
To commence with, going to different places and visit them will provide an opportunity for people to become familiar with many things like culture and civilization, costume, tradition and so forth. Generally phrased, although people might have some information about their country, abroad countries will provide fertile ground for individuals to enhance their experiences dramatically. As a tangible example, my brother and I went to the Italy last year and we went to the local popular theater in the town. The way of talking, clothing style, dancing, behavior and so forth, helped us understand what the culture or society is. In spite of many culture and costume in our country, foreign countries will provide a unique program to represent their history and culture. To elucidate more on this issue, travel is a suitable way that not only can represent various people with a different culture but also can be the most cost effective way of accessing all places around the world.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that traveling will provide an opportunity for people to enhance their social skills and become familiar with many individuals. To put it in another word, going abroad not only can make people to make a new friend ship but also can coerce them to learn other languages. In this way, human beings can socialize with foreign people and learn many things. Going into the depth, travel to other country is informative and might encourage people to discover everything and enhance their knowledge. However, travel to the different country need a substantial amount of budget and people always complain from staggering costs. Indeed, people will be able to travel to their country with least amount of money and save their money when they are on a tight budget.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterated that
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 642, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun culture seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cultures'.
Suggestion: many cultures
... the culture or society is. In spite of many culture and costume in our country, foreign cou...
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Line 5, column 723, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...will be able to travel to their country with least amount of money and save their money wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in fact, by and large, in spite of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04195804196 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65233446191 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51048951049 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8875899736 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.842105263 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293717346933 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898313256924 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832279424224 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155480180672 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105445134317 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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