people should help charities by giving extra money of their wealth.
There is a well-known saying: 'do not judge a book by its cover', with which I quite agree. so similarly, I firmly believe we should not judge one's personality by his or her clothes.
To begin with, I understand that some people would argue that clothing styles can reflect individuals' preferences, thereby indicating their inside character. when seeing people with clean and tidy clothes, it is more likely that they are serious and have a positive attitude to their life. And youngsters with trendy clothes are more likely to have stronger sociable skills and outgoing character.
reasonable as the above argument may seem, in my opinion, it is superficial and lacks a deep understanding of the relation between the inside and the outside of humans. The point is that people are complicated and social animals with rich emotions, which make their choices for clothes be influenced by many other vital factors besides their own characters. For one thing, their commercial situation is quite dominant when purchasing clothes. For example, many young ladies are quite open-minded to accept the latest trend, but because of low incomes they tend to choose cheaper but outdated ones. can we regard them as stubborn people who refuse novel things? I do not think so. For another thing, the outside environment can be very influential. To be more specific, sometimes we tend to choose similar styles compared with our friends' or family's in order to gain a sense of belonging. In that case, these clothes have nothing to do with our willingness and at least only reflect the features of people close to us.
Furthermore, everyone has the right to choose how they dress up themselves regardless of others' thoughts. people who encourage individuals to judge individuals by their outlooks and clothes have made no positive contribution but only spread prejudgment and biases about some special clothing styles. I can take miniskirts as a perfect example. it is not uncommon that girls with miniskirts are judged by strangers in public since they tend attach some sexual meaning to such clothes, but the fact is that the reason why those girls are wearing them is solely out of the hot weather. In addition, some thieves usually dress quite appropriately to mislead others.
To sum up, it is biased to judge people by their clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, look, may, similarly, so, well, another thing, at least, for example, in addition, for another thing, for one thing, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03359173127 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6680884778 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0517029709 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111933785871 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354695590957 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044605590799 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774983291609 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409454593975 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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