People should spend money on things that last a long time, such as an expensive piece of jewelry, and not spend money on short-term pleasures like vacations.
The statement presents that money should be investd only on things which gives us a return value like an expensive piece of jewelry and not on short term pleasures like vacations. Obviously, this is a question which every adult strives to resolve their entire lifespan. Therefore there is a need of profound revelation before concluding.
The author belief about spending wisely is definitely a long term plan. With the everyday rising prices of every commodities and the corresponding custom duties have proflirated the cost of living. In addition to increasing cost of living, the scarcity of resources, raises a major concern. For example, if one decides to buy clothes and other artificial accessories it's nugatory but, even buying a small piece of jewellery with the same money is an investment and helps in desperate times.
However, constantly worrying about the future is no treasure. With the increasing stress to earn and save for future, it is important to live the present. One doesn't know what the future holds for him/her. If one isn't happy with their present situation, their future is precarious. For instance, if one's work life is getting hectic and causing stress, it is important to take a breat. Short term pleasures like vacation definitely comes in handy here. If we dont work on ourseleves, our mental health it will lead to an unhealthy lifestyle.
While this essay propounds the importance of long term investment, living the present is equally important. In some sense, spending money on things which gives a return is important. However, its also important to not forget the present and only think about future. This will turn one into a miser.
How to resolve this adult's everyday poser then? It is always smart to be economical. If we have found a perfect balance between siezing the day and saving for the future, we have learnt to live the life. Both carry equal weightage in one's life.
We can buy everything but not every thing with money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97289156627 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60624682247 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6959773305 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7826086957 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4347826087 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17391304348 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227953872563 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549100804651 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964041414808 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116772020146 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786780617308 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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