People think that success comes through hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.
Nothing comes by chance. All that we achieve is through hard work, perseverance and persistance. Some people think that something they got was by lucky. And, I can say that they are wrong. In my opinion if we want to succeed in life we need to have a plan and start working on it.
Firstly, being successful in life requires long hours of work. We have to work properly to accomplish any task. We cannot only stand sitting and wait untill something good happens because it will not come till further actions. For instance, a student needs to study hard to enter in a very famous university. It is quite impossible to pass the test without any preparation. I had to spend long hours studying for the test sometimes even not being able to stop for a dinner or any other break. Fortunately, afterwords, I was adimitted in a university.
Secondly, as it is stated in science, there are some sort of attractions in our lives. While we are working, those attractions combine to each other in order to help us. This means that luck is not related to success.
However, there are some circumstances when we feel that luck is presented. I remember when my math teacher took a test to get a job at university. He had been studying a specific book about rockets. When he took the test he realized that every questions he had been studying so far were in the test. Therefore, he was selected to work for the university.
Finally, if we want to achieve success, we should do it so only through hard work because luck is not a matter for it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sorts'?
Suggestion: sorts
...it is stated in science, there are some sort of attractions in our lives. While we a...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...studying a specific book about rockets. When he took the test he realized that every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49103942652 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62286256294 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6692727717 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228425040092 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674269768354 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849550406636 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137017592727 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875936623058 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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