People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do—rather than doing things they should do.
Undoubtedly, it is true most of the people spend a lot of time in doing things they like to do over the things they need to do. However, I disagree with this notion that too much time is being spent in doing personal enjoyment rather than doing the things that has to be done because of following three reasons.
First of all, it is necessary that we dedicate some time to the things that we enjoy doing as it helps us in taking pressure off from our mind and we can feel fresh enough to do work again. For instance, the employees working in consulting firm feel exhausted due to working for long hours and hence, need some or other kind of entertainment, which comes through doing things that they enjoy.
Secondly, we don’t have a note of our time while doing the things we like and as result we may feel that we have wasted much of our invaluable time. Nevertheless, this helps to light our mood and we can do the mandatory things with double the pace. For instance, playing games like PUB-G, we will never feel how much time we are wasting. But certainly, we enjoy doing it so, we can work more effectively after playing.
Finally, some people might do the things they need to do as personal enjoyment. In other words, they take interest in very possible thing and enjoy it at almost every instant and due to this they never feel bore or dull. For example, PhD scholars who are working on their thesis enjoys it every day as if they don’t learn to enjoy it they won’t be able to complete their PhD degree.
In conclusion, it is necessary that we don’t spend a lot of time on only the things we like. However, at a same time it is quite necessary that we enjoy our life with the things we enjoy and also, with the things we compulsory need to do. Hence, the above three points supports my opinion that spend time on personal enjoyments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28091585936 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469387755102 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6008732247 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7857142857 5.45110844103 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499963835603 0.236089414692 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222328621586 0.076458572812 291% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15992010175 0.0737576698707 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348111445844 0.150856017488 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178548363969 0.0645574589148 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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