People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do
When it comes to the issue of people now doing things they should do rather than doing things they like to do, some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reason for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponent could provide us with strong purposes to support their thought. I believe that people now doing things they like more than things they should do because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraphs:
First of all, in my opinion it is widely understood that people now doing things they like more than what they should do because of the wide spread of the social media. So, many people now waste along time on facebook, inestegram and other social media.
Another reason why I advocate that the attitude of the time that people spend in doing what the like is the rapid development of technology. In addition, to the rapid grow of life that makes daily activitities like cooking can be accomplished with less time than it was before, that provides additional time to enjoy or life in it.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that a wide spread of joyful places like restaurants, theaters and others. Those places attracted people to spend their time and money in them. Such places was less expended in the past so people was rarely go to them
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people’s opinions are over whelming too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a long time'?
Suggestion: a long time
...social media. So, many people now waste along time on facebook, inestegram and other socia...
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Line 6, column 196, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...eir time and money in them. Such places was less expended in the past so people was...
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Line 6, column 247, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...pended in the past so people was rarely go to them From what has been discusse...
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Line 6, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the past so people was rarely go to them From what has been discussed above, we m...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213414634146 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.164634146341 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0975609756098 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0457317073171 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0731707317073 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121951219512 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0365853658537 0.0351676179071 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37607471097 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0274390243902 0.0309702414327 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0884146341463 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030487804878 0.0209618222197 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0274390243902 0.0139019557991 197% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1711.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 299.0 408.028673835 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72240802676 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294314381271 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.173913043478 0.251872472559 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123745819398 0.174417080927 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0735785953177 0.112833075102 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37607471097 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 52.7461385905 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 27.1818181818 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2757218671 48.84282405 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.545454545 120.699889404 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 0.644075263715 183% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 44.5731225296 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.31182795699 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334973889212 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145341380722 0.103427244359 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101950884584 0.0752933317313 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600269030483 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.204651288991 0.151897553556 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148227928196 0.114077575197 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14062394066 0.0781384742642 180% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291259021086 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0710024842464 0.067059652881 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188448362465 0.210909579961 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120138089682 0.0618886996521 194% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.