Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
When it comes to the issue that the young people today must be highly organized, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different thoughts. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thought. I believe that it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organized because of many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it’s very important for the young people to be highly organized to reduce the stress of their life. Today the life is very hard and everyone have many tasks to do during the day. So, arranging a daily schedule is very important to be productive. Eventually, the person will feel more comfort and less stressful because he put enough time for each task by managing his time and resources. However, unorganized schedule will waste our life.
Another point why I advocate that the ability of the young people to organize their day is very important because of the high competition between the young people today for the jobs. The plan helps the person to achieve his goal in economical way and with less mistakes. If the person put priorities in his task, he can reach his goal easily. While working without a plan, will waste the money and the time.
Finally, it is well-established fact that working on plan helps us to be creative. Also, the plan makes us more flexible to adapt to the new situation and be more flexible because we will solve big problem step by step.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which says, people who hold opposite opinion may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinion are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun mistakes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...eve his goal in economical way and with less mistakes. If the person put priorities ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74242424242 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4176444303 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6248620307 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305378328916 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975798615103 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088293726167 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150636745384 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841273360305 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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