a person should be different from others to become successful in his or her life
With the advent of human modern society more and more, a plethora of developments have been emerged by many unique individuals. Different people have distinct viewpoints in regard to whether or not a person should be different from others to become successful in his or her life. Although a large proportion of people prefer to behave like the other members of society since it is more convenient, I, to a great extent, take this view that it would be better if we try to be different from other people. My reasons are manifold, among which the most significant ones are substantiated in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, the first exquisite point to be mentioned is that special individuals enjoy some unique characteristics. As a result, such attributes contribute into numerous positions and opportunities for the given person. As a matter of fact, we live in a world in which almost all employers are always seeking some people having several unusual abilities. To clarify, consider one who is going to work in the Microsoft Company. It is crystal clear that the managers of companies with high reputation put a high value on some especial skills and knowledge like powerful program which play a pivotal role in their job. Therefore, one with a great and unique skills has much further chance for taking the position in comparison to a regular clerk. In other words, the more special skill one possesses, the more opportunity he/she face.
Second, beyond a shadow of a doubt, a person who is completely different from others face new horizon during his/her life. In fact, the globe is formed based on some mathematical and physical laws. For this reason, we expect to acquire a certain result when do a specific activity. Consequently, if we act like the other people, we must get the same outcome as they did. Hence, prosperity is far reach since a large percentage of human beings have not been able to succeed by this procedure, and we should make our attempt to be totally diverse. In addition, when we pass a diverse way, we most probably face novel events and happenings; and consequently, we can discover some revolutionary method or idea which helps us to pay the way toward the apex of success.
To sum up, considering the aforementioned arguments, we may draw the conclusion that an individual with special characteristics, skills, and so forth, are most likely to be prosperous in their life. Not only does this attribute provide them with more opportunities, but it also helps them to find new thins and succeed some day soon or later. Overall, I highly recommend that people do put their effort to become different by experiencing various situations and activities in order to succeed in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 834, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
... possesses, the more opportunity he/she face. Second, beyond a shadow of a doubt,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, in regard to, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85895669173 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569264069264 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3474089668 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.85 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298663431659 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870979465487 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166092429179 0.0737576698707 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189975723377 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143424185484 0.0645574589148 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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