A person should never make an important decision alone
Choosing a choice could be difficult some time, especially, when we have not experienced that situation. In my opinion, I could not agree more that a crucial decision which comes from one single head should not be made. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore through the following paragraphs.
To begin with, thinking all alone could lead to miserable mental health. People would build anxiety and stressful on their mind when they have to make a choice, obviously, when the choices are made accidentally and panickingly. These bring about worries and affect to their life. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About 4 years ago, when I had to choose my major in engineering faculty. And I was anxious about what major should choose. I started surfing on the internet to find the information about what is subject going to teach in each major? What the opportunities after graduation? What is the most major that gain the highest salary per years? As soon as I had surfed, the stressful came up to my heart. I could not eat or sleep well, and these affected to my productivity after that day. Until I realized that I was not alone and I started to ask people around me such as my family members, my professor advisor and my friends. Eventually, I chose Civil engineering as my major and I still really love this choice I made. Without asking people around me, I could be regret on this time and crying at the corner of my room now.
Secondly, asking people for making a crucial solution is faster, which it could lead us to do something more effective. For instance, last semester I asked my senior how to read a book before soil mechanic test because there was too many stuff I have to read before the exam. And I got advice from them that I should read only the concept and the analysis. I could skip some details or how it comes to our life. Surely, I got "A" letter in Soil mechanics, and if I read all a ton of handouts, I think my perfect transcript could be ruined.
Finally, I am of the opinion that it is better to get someone involved to make a crucial decision. That's because it helps you more comfortable in daily life after you had made the choice and it is faster and affects to our later productivity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much stuff', 'a good deal of stuff'.
Suggestion: much stuff; a good deal of stuff
...oil mechanic test because there was too many stuff I have to read before the exam. And I g...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ne involved to make a crucial decision. Thats because it helps you more comfortable i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53902439024 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57402135981 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539024390244 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4776245879 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5416666667 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796060735898 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233313540897 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320957786515 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463719470446 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109511547248 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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