A person should never make an important decision alone.
Some people believe that people have to make essential decisions for themselves, as do I, while others argue it is better to the experience of surrounds.
To begin with, any decision is a responsibility, no matter what the problem is related with. In other words, when a person makes a decision, she/he poses risk to make a mistake or select a wrong way. While one says that a mistake is less likely if we request to help others in decision making. This is, for we can base on additional experience. On the other hand, my feelings are that a fraction of burden will lie on shoulders of adviser. So, if we imagine that a person has made an inappropriate decision, she/he can start blaming the person, who tries to help him/her in finding a solution to the problem. In my point of view, the situation is not fair. To avoid arguments, it is much better to make a decision alone and run all risk for ourselves.
What is more, an advice from others cannot be always appropriate for every situation. By this I mean, that someone experience may not fit the context of a hardship. That leads to unsatisfaction of the decision in the long run since it is based on the inappropriate experience. Moreover, some of the people think that they try to help, yet they are involuntary pursue their own goals. To clarify, if a person avoids posing any risks and for that reason does not achieve success, that person will also give advice not to run risks. The involuntary goal of the adviser can be not to allow us to achieve success since he did not reach it. Consequently, we can miss an opportunity even if there was a chance to reach success. Thus, making decisions by our own allows us to make our own mistakes instead of repeating faults of others.
To summarize, my feelings are that it is better for everyone to make decisions alone. In that case, we carry our responsibility by our own and influence on our life way more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...ll risk for ourselves. What is more, an advice from others cannot be always appropriat...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...the inappropriate experience. Moreover, some of the people think that they try to help, yet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, i mean, in other words, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5446685879 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69418389254 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533141210375 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4767855511 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220236605926 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629416649092 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06160501273 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131489145947 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323881130743 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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