A person should never make an important decision alone.
do you agree or disagree
In the contemporary world life is constructed on the decisions which we make while going through it. To my mind, it is very complex to comprehend the importance of making the right choice while runnig through this extraordinary milestone. And I assume that it would be much more profitable for the people to make vital decisions with the help of others.
Firstly, in the world where we live in, there are abundant amount of people, who are much more sophisticated than us, and those people have seen the life from numerous prespectives. Moreover, these highly experienced individuals, encountered ample amount of problems in life, and have made very serious decisions while going through those hardships. Thus, I consider that it would be much more beneficial for us to go and ask some advice about the prospective decisions which we could make. The main reason for this is that as I mentioned before, they are more sophisticated in making essential decisions, and their life experience could help us to make the most suitable decision for our personal success.
Secondly, to my mind, making important decisions in life all alone, could have some detrimental impact on our future. Indeed, all of us will make decisions in this life, however, the most vital concept about this, is that it is easy to make wrong choice, and one biased step can destroy your career. Consequently, this idea shows the importance of making the correct decision in life. Conversely, if you make a wrong action, this could start the ending trial of your life.
Thirdly, the times when we have to make these essential decisions encounter us, when we are less experienced in life. For example, the period of deciding which field to study professionally. As we all know, on these occasions, we have variety of options to choose from, and each decision could give you diverse future. Moreover, as a person who lacks life experience, we could straightforwardly make the wrong decision, which could give us a future that is not desireble in our personal view.
In conclusion, i would like to state that our future and prospective career depends strongly on the decisions which we make. Thus, it would be much more worthwhile, to make important decisions with people who have been through this complex marathon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... in our personal view. In conclusion, i would like to state that our future and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96605744125 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77147374995 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467362924282 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0022763842 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.882352941 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20026385165 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847272937435 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452840193774 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134605200543 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338842047898 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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