Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
With the significant development of the world, every day scientists work on specific technological researches, just to find new innovations which can be beneficial to the contemporary world and its inhabitants. As we all know, there have been lots of technological advances through out the development of mankind. To my mind, one of the most precious innovations of the mankind is the internet. It is quite straightforward that the innovation of the internet had a tremendous influences on our lives, and these impacts are very beneficial.
Firstly, with the help of internet, we have access to variety of information. In contrast, before the innovation of internet, it was very challenging to obtain specific information. However, nowadays, it is less time consuming to gain information which is important to you. Moreover, you can get whatever you want, and whenever you want with the help of internet, and this concept is effective as a snap of a finger. In my personal experience, I find myself very obligated to the internet. Because I am a student, and the internet provides me with the amply amounts of sources which i can use for my development and for my studies. Thus, I assume that internet is essential for the people who are tend to increase their outlook.
Secondly, besides the self-development, internet can serve you as a source of entertainment. To be more precise, there are lots of websites where you can go and get enormous amounts of fun and satisfaction, For example, the website which is called youtube. This website provides us with variety of viral and interesting videos. Moreover, you can work and gain money from that website, and have fun at the same time.
Thirdly, with the significant influence which internet has, you can on the internet without going anywhere. By the way, the specific internet based works can help you to gain tremendous amounts of income in a short period of time. The implementation of this concept changed millions of people's life style in a beneficial way. By working in specific websites or in other internet based sources, you can have a tremendous impact on the society.
In conclusion, I assume that the innovation of the internet has helped us a lot in our contemporary life, and the importance of this finding will always be the most precious one to me.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ave been lots of technological advances through out the development of mankind. To my mind,...
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Line 1, column 478, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'influence'?
Suggestion: influence
...vation of the internet had a tremendous influences on our lives, and these impacts are ver...
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Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...with the amply amounts of sources which i can use for my development and for my s...
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Line 2, column 690, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...at internet is essential for the people who are tend to increase their outlook. Secon...
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Line 2, column 698, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...net is essential for the people who are tend to increase their outlook. Secondly, ...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...tremendous amounts of income in a short period of time. The implementation of this concept cha...
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Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a beneficial way" with adverb for "beneficial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... changed millions of peoples life style in a beneficial way. By working in specific websites or in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95128205128 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06306816571 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479487179487 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4129322561 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.55 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161796285549 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569166161036 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335333357525 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948809273182 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429534448253 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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