A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think person would like or dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
The town of Ota is generally a nice place to stay. However, there are some things that may not sit well with someone who is just coming in to settle down in the town. That said, the person would surely get used to those occurrences within a short while.
One of the things that a newcomer may not find friendly in the town is the sorry state of the road networks. The roads that links the town with every other city are barely motorable, as such, travelling in and out of the town is relatively expensive, time-consuming and stressful. For instance, it took me 3 hours to travel down to Lagos from Ota; a journey which is barely 30 kilometers. To cap it off, the transport fare was about three time the average price of traveling such a distance. In addition, the electricity supply in the town is regimented. There are parts of the city where the residents would have access to electricity for two days and there would be no electricity supply on the third day. So, people have to plan their activities with respect to the possibility of electricity supply.
That said, there are some things that could attract anyone to the town. First of all, the town is relatively peaceful and calm. The tranquility of the town would make anyone love it. Compare to Lagos and Abeokuta where different crimes like robbery, rape and murder are always reported on a daily basis, the rate of criminal activities in the town is low. The level of noise pollution is also minimal, and the town as a salubrious atmosphere as a whole.
Lastly, the rate of inflation in the town is generally low and the price of foodstuffs is especially meagre. Therefore, one can get so much with little money in the town and the excess monies can be saved and invested. I as a person save much more than a friend of mine who stays in Ibadan even though he earns more than I do, and he is the frugal type. To round it up, I believe any new settler would find the inexpensive and tranquil nature of my town pleasing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loves'.
Suggestion: loves
...anquility of the town would make anyone love it. Compare to Lagos and Abeokuta where...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, third, well, while, for instance, in addition, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46556473829 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48610036083 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531680440771 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.271876377 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3157894737 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192174014033 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058305576909 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274885903843 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115198662253 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114849446619 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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