pet shoul be treated as family member or not
I strongly believe that pets should be treated like family members, as when we take them to our home they become the member of our family and family should be treated well.
To begin with, reason I hold this opinion is because I feel whether its pet, some things or any human being, we get attached to them if it is present in our home, so why not a pet. Pets behave so likewise as humans do, they show emotions, give attachment and more of, as we mostly welcome pet when they were baby and we should treat them as we treat human baby. That require a proper care, proper time investment, doctor checkup and many more to add on this. When we do all these things, we don't realise that they become part of our live and we get so attached to them and involve them in our every event of life. For instance, I can explain this with my example, we bought a puppy year back, his name is bruno, earlier he was little we used to pamper a lot like a kid now as he get older he play with us, in fact sometimes he get angry with us. So we treat bruno as our family member, in fact sometime he gets more importance than us, we celebrate bruo's birthday where we invite his friends, like neighbour's dog. So this way we care them and I feel it is also a responsibilty as we took that puppy to our home, we can't allow that puppy to feel alone. We want pet to enjoy, live happily with us.
The another reason I feel caring of pet like family is not important in fact it is by default known thing. Living with pet is a marvelous experience one can have. When we treat them as family member, they even respect us back, they also enjoy our company. We know that animals and human can not communicate via sound but we also know that sound is always not needed for communication, sometime actions are enough to convey the message. Same happens when human baby, they used to express their thought by actions and some expression likewise pets does. One biggest advantage I feel living with pet can achieved is that pets vanishes humans loneliness. For instance now a days people started living in nuclear family and in old age people only live alone and when they have pet in home, their loneliness really get feds away. This way the pet is member of family and get treated like one. Another advantage human receive after treating pet well is that after a little training theses pets become efficient enough to help the human and give hand to every work.
So these are the reason I believe that pets should be treated like family as when we treat them well, they will treat us back with more love. In case if someone can't treat them with love don't bring them to home, as they have emotions and feelings and have equal value as human have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, really, so, well, for instance, i feel, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30604288499 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10263716088 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4522417154 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4649099865 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.45 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.65 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27200034002 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11990507177 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123527937183 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259248219646 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124134884525 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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