I agree with the statement that the pets should be treated like family members. We know that the animals either live in wild or with a human who owns them. WIld Animals as compare to pets are independent enough to defend themselves or hunt for food. But the pets are dependent on humans to provide food and protection. As we own them, it becomes our responsibility to take care of them and to be a proper guardian we should tream them like family members. If we do so, we will respect them enough to keep them healthy and give proper shelter. Pets requires proper care and food, and if we treat them like a family member, they would live longer. For example, if we consider a dog, it totally depends on humans to give them food, required clothing and shelter. Sometimes they also require to be taken to a vet for inspection. And if they are not in good care, it is detrimental to their health and could cause diseases and early death. But if the dog is treated like a family member, it would be given food at time, proper clean shelter and if it is sick, they would not be ignored and would be taken to the vet immediately.
Pets have such a short social life that for them the Humans are everything and they give unconditional love to us. For example, Dogs and cats lives usually rotate around their owner and they are always present if their owner is in need of solace. In return, if we treat pets as family members, we would give them unconditional love in return. It will also be benificial for a person if they treat their pet like family member that if in case, if they are ever feeling lonely or down, having a pet who is like a family will help the person feel better. Nonetheless, a person should love their pets and treat them like family member as it a humane thing to do.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34029850746 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31360808195 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441791044776 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7813884969 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40747956458 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164954372341 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190888643467 0.0737576698707 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.358836001493 0.150856017488 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130957171068 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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