As far as I concern, people have been debating about the pros and cons of the playing computer games. Computer is a broad medium and it can easily attract children, In fact not just the computer, any king of games or internet medium can easily pull the children's concentration towards it. Some people like to allow their kids to play all computer games and they think it may help kids to develop their brain, while some people like do not want their children to use any kind of computer games. My two rationales are as follows.
To begin with, playing computer games can prevent them to pay outdoor games. Indoor games mainly computers make kids lazy and obese which can affect children's health when they will grow up. I will take my friend's kids example to illustrate this. One of my best friend whose name is Riva. Her son loves to play all king of x-box and internet base games, he never like to play any outdoor game like basketball, baseball etc.. Her neighbor's kids come to my friend's house to take her son out to ride a bicycle. My friend's son never agreed to go out and all he likes to eat, seat in front of television or playing computer games that made him really obese and lethargic. It eventually affected him when he went to the high school to play any kind of sports and get any kind of scholarship for the college.
The another reason is that computer games can make kid socially detached. Social communication is very important for the children to achieve normal developmental milestone and social communication is very important part of the milestone. For example, I have seen my cousin grew up with playing computer games and he never had any kind of interest for the outdoor games. When we grew up together as kids and I always played basketball since i was a kid. I see marked communication detachment in my cousin when he went to the college, he stayed interrogative person and never communicated with other students. So, nobody in the class wanted to share any books or material with him. That eventually affected him in the finals. So, I have learnt lesson that most of the time outdoor sports can help you to grow up as a better person.
However, some people might asset that there is nothing wrong with the playing computer games and even some parents also believe that games will help their kids to improve their compassion and competition spirit. Again as per my view, Everyone has their own perspectives. Recently, one survey released by the federal research center, more than two thirds of parents believe of the playing outdoor games is more beneficial to improve kid's confidence level.
All in all, I strongly believe that all computer games can make the children home bound as well socially detached. In general, I wholeheartedly believe that a very first thing we should do now is to admit the importance of the playing outdoor games as the key to open the door of our children's bleak future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, may, really, so, third, well, while, even so, for example, in fact, in general, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67181467181 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49370340464 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474903474903 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.0 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4482328988 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.72 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307625771763 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844241124906 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745477792394 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185390143275 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417443932657 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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