Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is generally assumed that, teachers play a vital role in one's success.That having been considered, whether teachers these days are in the same social position as they been in the past or not has always been a much debated arguments. Despite the arguments asserting that it could be reduced in close years, i believe otherwise maintaing that we can not lose the sight of that all we have now its came from our teachers.
First and foremost, the crux of the matter lies in the fact that from an psycological standpoint, students' behavior shaping starts from an early age specialy, from elementary school. Strictly speaking, if from begining students learn to be a right person in the progress of their flourish are more likely to be a success person in the future. The best example that fits this argument is, students who learn to be honest with their parents in diffrent situations such as when they got bad gardes in school, in the future they are reluctant to tell lie to their partner or co-worker, and ... . Therefore, it is reasonable to assume that, we cant ignore the importance of teachers in our lives.
Another equally important point to consider is, what major will stundet choose in the future is highly depend on our teachers. in fact, when we have teachers who are admmired in both perfossional and personal skills, willing or not-willing, inspire students to choose same major as their favorite teacher. Therefore, it leaves no doubt that, teachers can have a positive effect on our future career.
In the final analysis,some might contend that, since the widespread use of the Internet or social media can be an alternative for teachers this days i take issue with them and believed this mind-set is nothing but a tunnel-vision that fails to consider the fact that, teachers as a core of education proccess can not be replaced with anything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, in fact, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85534591195 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65399904625 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5949718905 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.4 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0952896734654 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037675070656 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298653292323 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581291583591 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136156951372 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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