Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not prefer enough time to help their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Community is a valuable thing in every young person's life. It gives people personality and prestige. But, what these young people do in favor of their beloved community. There are plenty of debates, whether nowadays juveniles dedicate enough time to their community or not. Personally, I agree these days no one pays enough attention to the community as well as past due to a couple of reasons, among which financial issues and nowadays Hectic life are two important.
First, the kind of society we live in bring up people more greedy than before. Nowadays, children do not suffice to their parent's income. They always want more. In their belief, the more they try, the more they gain for themselves. These avarice people asses everything with money. So they become neglectful to their community, which endowed them invaluable blessings like personality, prestige, and statues. My friend's experience illustrates a perfect example of this concept. He spent years in his country, attend school and university, and utilize from different facilities that the community offered him free. But finally, he immigrated to another country and left the community to improve his situation. in fact, he completely ignored the duty of compensating community's serves.
Moreover, life gets more challenging as time passes. People, Specially young ones, find more concerns to have about life rather than the past. There is a new problem in every days life. And bypassing the time as the duties, lie on the shoulders of young people, enhance, they find less time to serve their country. For example, back to childhood, I always believed that I should become a doctor to help people in deprived rural without earning much. But now I am a doctor who is juggling the demands between work and family. This complicated life changed my desires and turned me to an unrespectful person for her community.
To summarize, As alleged, juveniles devoted most of their time to other things rather than serving their community. And it is because, both the current challenging lifestyle and young's demands about finance issues rife most of their time nowadays. However, they should understand their community's value and decrease selfishness about their needs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...nity is a valuable thing in every young persons life. It gives people personality and p...
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Line 3, column 710, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...the community to improve his situation. in fact, he completely ignored the duty of...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...e past. There is a new problem in every days life. And bypassing the time as the dut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in fact, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19390581717 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64767783085 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601108033241 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1412952061 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.44 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183406628409 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496314851269 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047846694433 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115221527952 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043120629773 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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