Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is generally agreed that it is difficult to choose a career nowadays, due to the quickly changeable environment, a large number of jobs, and the more knowledge required to have a job. As a matter of fact, in the past, we can identify the job leading to security and success easier.
First of all, the world changes much more frequently than it used to be. With the emergence of new ideas and techniques, some jobs are created. However, there are also a lot of jobs disappearing, because the development of robots replaced them. Jobs such as timekeeper who earned a stable salary in the 1900s are disappeared completely. We cannot make sure that the career today will not be replaced in the future. Therefore, it is very difficult to distinguish a secure career.
What's more, the number of the kind of careers is increasing sharply. Comparing a few types of job in the past, the new appeared ones require people to collect more information to know about the background and the future of them. A wise decision often needs a lot of information in all aspects. The more types of the job, the more time consumed to collect this information.
Besides, the job opening today requires more professional knowledge, due to the detailed divided work. It is axiomatic that the knowledge you have in a certain field can hardly be used in an irrelated job. If you lose your job due to changes in the world, it would be difficult to find a job and make your fortune. However, careers in the past require more knowledge from different fields, which means you can find a new one easily.
In a nutshell, it was easier to identify and decide what kind of career you would take in the future, because of the more stable world in the past, the less kind of jobs, and the more knowledge from different fields. Therefore, we need to work harder to keep our job secure and successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... to the quickly changeable environment, a large number of jobs, and the more knowledge required t...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...lt to distinguish a secure career. Whats more, the number of the kind of careers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, therefore, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63198780245 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0687268381 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223253373653 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071195240378 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578159961221 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137670821391 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403665931579 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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