Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, young people’s life is filled with abundant of information and choices. Although the possibility of success is increasing, troubles come with the plenty of opportunities. Under this situation, planning is very important for us to complete ours dream. Individuals who want to accomplish their career efficiently have to learn how to plan and organize first. The ability of planning and organization conclude arranging time, evaluating emergency and importance of work. In my point of view, these competences are becoming gradually crucial in recent competition.
First of all, clear plan of the future helps people live an efficient life. During our work, we always face numerous assignments. Some of them are important, some are urgent, some are difficulty, so we need to put all the mission in an order. First the urgent, then the important, we also save time and energy for the hard tasks. This kind of list assist us schedule time of one day even one year. Plan also help us prepare for the problems in advance. If we have a plan before we confront the troubles, we can deal with them easier and save our time. Taking myself as an example, I have a plan book when I prepare my TOEFL exam, the book records every thing I need to do during the period of studying time. This book boosts my efficiency of study and give me a reasonable study cycle.
Organize for the future can make our mind clear. Most of us have a grant dream that we want to accomplish in a short time. Actually, we have to take big goals into small part and attain little goals step by step. This procedure like we climb a mountain, making plan is prepare the stairs we need. The plan tells us what to do currently and next and also tells us the direction of our ways. With plan people can feel less stress and more energy. As a student, I often have a sense of failure, because I think I just take a tiny step of my goal. But when I see my plan, I know how long the distance between my effort and my aims and I am decreasing the distance. So, I will feel much better and devoted into my work immediately. Working hard is a life long process and clear mind can help us comfortably and efficiently finish our work. Therefore, the ability of plan and organize is curtail to us.
Lift like a forest and we get missing easily, but the plan of future like the banners can lead us to travel through the forest.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56120092379 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54936487973 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528868360277 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5647432675 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1481481481 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.037037037 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07407407407 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183345177384 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561768788244 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428352606414 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115779960809 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474183053896 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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