Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is generally agreed that information is explosive in our daily life, which brings an increasing pressure for people to process them. There is a majority of people holding the view that things happened around the world have no overlaps with them and it's a waste of time and energy for them to know about these news. However, as far as I am concerned, I would like to subscribe the idea that all events interaction with each other and the more information you know, the greater help you will gotten. To support my stance, in the course of essay, I will substantiate my point of view.
With the rapid development of modern world, it is hard to say things happened in a distant country have no affect on our daily life. As we know, with the trend of globlelization, all countries are band with each other, especially in the domain of economy. For instance, as we know, China takes part in the world globlelization as the world's factory. Things can be that if the human resource cost rise, which seems inrelavant to a western family, the price of the goods in western supermarket will increase. And it indeed can be a direct influence on them. Therefore, events happening around the world really has matters with everyone.
Forthermore, being aware of the events taking place around the world will give you a lot of experiences. People learn from books and contemporary enevts are live textbooks. By thinking and studying the reason leading to the event, we cans learn a lot and rise our alert. Maybe when the same problem happens in your own life, you can find a idol to follow and it becomes easier for you to figure out solutions.
In addition, the more you know, the more competitivie you will be. The information seemed useless today may be a treasure one day in the future. The spread spectrum of knowledge will broaden your horizen. It is unwisdom to ignore the things and events unrelevant to you now.
In a word, accepting the information and ideas coming from all over the world. It is not a waste a life, but the collection of treasure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...he world have no overlaps with them and its a waste of time and energy for them to ...
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Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
... time and energy for them to know about these news. However, as far as I am concerned, I w...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...uld like to subscribe the idea that all events interaction with each other and the mor...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 494, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'get' or 'be gotten'?
Suggestion: get; be gotten
...ion you know, the greater help you will gotten. To support my stance, in the course of...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...s happened in a distant country have no affect on our daily life. As we know, with the tr...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...part in the world globlelization as the worlds factory. Things can be that if the huma...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch seems inrelavant to a western family, the price of the goods in western superm...
^^
Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'can'
Suggestion: can
...ing the reason leading to the event, we cans learn a lot and rise our alert. Maybe w...
^^^^
Line 9, column 339, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... happens in your own life, you can find a idol to follow and it becomes easier fo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67582417582 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61788249911 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541208791209 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9903425842 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160462922136 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464252142656 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380909344898 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856533253178 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394243144307 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.