Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The difference of age groups is a big factor decisive about so many characteristics of people belonging to such portions of the society. They differ on so many levels, whether physical, psychological, mental, social etc.
Young people are definitely more energetic, impulsive, naive, innocent and immature compared to the older generation. By the virtue of these facts the young people are definitely a lot more easily impacted and have a stronger inclination towards the opinions and agendas of famous and public figures like athletics and celebrities. Today, the celebrities and people of the showbiz are much closer access to the younger generation than they were ever before. The platforms like social media, internet, and various online applications have made it very easy for the masses to get in close contact with the celebrities and vice versa. Resultantly, the inclination towards such showbiz personalities and the effect of their actions on the younger generation is vast as compared to the older lot.
Young people are hot-blooded, ready to take action, in a hurry to achieve great things, have passion to enjoy great adventures, being more fanatic and motivated, they can easily fall for anything that the famous people set as trend and convert it into a rage.
The older lot, on the other hand is much more wise and seasoned as compared to the younger people. The older lot is the slow motion and analytical portion of the population, who take a lot of reasoning and logic to get convinced for any opinion. By the virtue of their life experiences both practical and personal they are far more poised and thoughtful compared to the younger fast and furious fanatics. The older group is the one, who takes the help of sound reasoning to step ahead. This age group considers its benefits and losses before any decision. The older people are a group more impressed by the people with a more formidable role in society, like activists, religious preachers, philosophers and scientists etc. The names in history who have achieved great success by their acts.
In a summation, i would strongly with the idea that younger people today are more moved by the opinions of famous people like celebrities and athletics. They reckon their opinions not only important but also they go to various extremes to prove their loyalty to their icons. They easily turn any trend or agenda into a widespread rage and fashion. Henceforth, it will be absolutely right to agree with the mentioned statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04819277108 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71541355054 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513253012048 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7390259412 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.263157895 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26315789474 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257848297863 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770269715698 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476918797801 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134472035186 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572260439878 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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