The rapid growth of the cities has a mostly positive effect on development of society.
Since the dawn of civilization, progression has had one of the greatest role in people's lives all over the world, for it has had one of the most prominent changes in their lives. Although some people believe that development of cities bring them negative consequences, I firmly agree with the idea that rapid growth of the cities have a positive effect on development of society. There are some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, it is undoubted that so influential have job opportunities been that they have had a great number of positive effect on people's lives all over the world, yet above all they have helped people to increase the quality of their lives by having decent job due to progression of their cities. T illustrate this fact, one needs only refer to the numerous prosperous people living in an advanced city where provides well- paid job for them. Take a personal experience as an example. There was a time that I had accepted in high- ranked university in an advanced city due to that after graduation I had no difficulty to find a decent job resulting in hiring in a famous computer program company. I strongly believe that had I not gone to this advanced city, I would not have found a decent job and paid my way easily.
Furthermore, it is established beyond doubt that one the hand some people believe that people cannot adopt themselves to a great deal of facilities which progression brings them, yet on the other hand some people believe that the facilities deriving from rapid growth of cities make people's life comfortable and convenient due to the fact that they are able to experience better life because they access to everything such as advanced public transportation, prestigious universities, large grocery stores, and so forth. I firmly agree with latter view point, for I believe that the more people living in advanced and sophisticated cities, the more they will be successful in their future. To demonstrate, there is a great consensus among scientists all over the world that swift progression of cities directly effect on people's lives. So, they established a worldwide experiment to estimate of effectiveness of this matter on people's lives. The results are surprising: approximately 90% of businessmen who eagerly want to invest in advanced cities to construct a great deal of facilities which make people's lives better replete with convenience.
To make a long story short, by considering all aforementioned reasons, no one can deny the enormous positive effect of rapid growth of cities on our hectic lives. Not only do they provide much more job opportunities for people living there, but also people are able experience better life due to accessing plenty of facilities. For this reason, I highly recommend that people go to advanced cities because they bring people several lucrative consequences like what mentioned above
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2453.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0163599182 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84930561633 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464212678937 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.241146715 48.9658058833 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.3125 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5625 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202414315906 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786175948402 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119430459951 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163817632688 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118677103352 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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