Reading paper material is better than watching electronic devices to gain information
In today's modern world, technological advancements and robotics are developing in a rapid rate. Hence, one must keep themselves updated to be at par with the most incredible technological changes taking place in today's society. Nowadays, several technical smart equipment are available for gaining information due to the availability of internet. But some people still believe the conventional paper form of material is more effective than watching news on electronic devices. In my opinion, in 21st century, electronic devices give a higher quality information compared to a traditional published paper. There are several reasons for my beliefs which will be illustrated in the following paragraphs.
First of all, visual mode of information has a stronger impact on the reader. One gets a three dimentional view of the exact topic compared to two dimentional images on paper. For instance, the news of the fall of twin towers in USA in 2001 had such a shocking impact on viewers that even today, after 20 years we are horrified by the dreadful impact a terrorist organisation can have in a country. Due to the invention of television, we could watch the exact action by rewinding it over and over again. This provided a better illustration of the tragedy compare to newspapers.
Secondly, visual news have come to human life as a gift. People can multitask while listening to the news. For instance, everyday before heading out to office, me and my family sit togather for breakfast and watch the news on television to keep ourselves updated with the current affairs.
Finally, the information are more updated in a television or internet as compared to a published article on paper or newspaper. It takes time to gather information and print in and publish and distribute to the locality, whereas in television we can watch news live from the current time with no lapse.
In conclusion, in our moder technologically advanced world, human lifestyle has drastically evolved as there is a constant challange of completing a task in shorter time. Thus a visual mode of information device provides humans with the advantage of improved understanding, multitasking, and valid updated and accurate information compared to reading a traditional paper.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22865013774 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06106846861 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564738292011 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8725158915 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256438245149 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662764585075 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790451733858 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120835418777 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712742669285 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.