Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Reading paper materials is better than watching electronic devices to gain information.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is said that watching electronic devices for finding infrormation is more beneficial than the reading paper materials. This essay agre with this statement because electronic devices can contain huge amount of information and to find information is very easy in electronic devices.
To begin with, one of the reasons for my specific thought is that electronic devices contains a large amount of information. The electronic devices has software system, which can contain very big information. In this modern technology different information is need to use in different situations. Again, electronic devices can be portable as, it can carried in any place, in any time. I have to admit my opinion on this matter has been profoundl influenced by my personal experience. I remember, when last year, Ijoined in a multinational company. I found that all of the employees used personal tablet to save various information, when they remained outside of the office or in house. Side by side, they used personal computer in the office to find different information. At first I was not used these types of instruments, but when my boss gave me an assignment, I felt that it was very difficult for me to do it without such type of electronic devices. At last I bough this devices. If I had not bought these electronic devices, it would has very difficult for me to complete the assignment in given time. So, from the example we can say that electronic devices is more essential than paper materials.
secondly, why i illustrates my specific thought is that electronic devices is very helpful incase of finding any information very easily. Because electronic devices facilitates us to use internet. By using internet we easily find any esoteric information in the device. In the electronic devices when we scarch in thing by writing the name ,these appear to the monitor of the device, but it takes a vast amount of time in case of paper material such as books, magagines. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. It reminds me of the time when two years ago I completed the graduation. I had to study for entering the job market. When I had used various paper, It would have taken huge time to collect the study materials. But after that my one of the freinds adviced me that I should use the computer and other electronic devices for my preparation. At last I completed my preparation and found jobs. If I had not used electronic devices for my preparation, It would have very difficult for me to find the job.
In conclusion , in light of above reasons I strongly believe that electronic devices for finding infrormation is more helpful than the reading paper materials. This is because it can remain vast amount of information and we can easily find information by using electronic devices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'carry'
Suggestion: carry
...onic devices can be portable as, it can carried in any place, in any time. I have to ad...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2334.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91368421053 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90643041524 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418947368421 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 773.1 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9189236398 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5925925926 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238359264198 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743202059866 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613225297714 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190201929224 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037651772354 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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