The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Almost every society has some level of rules and regulations. It is generally prepared in the perceptions of the majority group of people lives within the society. Every individual along with society is evolving day by day. In my opinion, society always expects their young people to follow strict rules and regulations, which I would explore in the following essays.
To begin with, the youth of today's societies were distracted by different new technologies. This modern equipment has more negative effects as compared to the positive ones. However, technology and young people are becoming two parts of the same coin. For eg: One of my friends always used to play the games. He was even forgetting his own duty of doing different tasks assigned by the professor. It had created addicted to him. In some cases, people have become espoused on some other types of things like; playing games, watching pornography, and other many like these things. To make them aware of the responsibility, every society always thinks to some extent about the young people, as it one of the transient periods of life. For control from the bad habits of the young people, there is a saying like every individual should have to be involved in a job like activities after crossing of twenty-one. As a result, youth can be concentrated and focused on certain types of duties and tasks. Consequently, these bounded rules and regulations make the young one become conscious of some extent.
Finally, each society has its own traditions and culture. The young people of this generation are forgetting about their rites and rituals. Thus, society is forced to make strong rules and regulations for its members. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. There is a culture of bathing and worshipping every morning in the brahmin family. So, why my mother always used to call me in the early morning and to do the daily schedule. This creates me to become active and healthy. As this culture has some types of scientific benefits. It increases awareness and creates more concentrate due to the worshipping of god in the early morning. Also, there is a proverb that Early to bed and early to rise. Our culture has some boundaries, although it is highly innocuous to us. Moreover, it would let us continue our culture, and it is the identity of any person and the family.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that every society demand for strict laws. This is because to prevent the individual to go beyond the demarcations of immoral activities, and because it helps to preserve the identity of our ancestors or past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reates me to become active and healthy. As this culture has some types of scientif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88261851016 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69704558724 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519187358916 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9350715847 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5862068966 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.275862069 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58620689655 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235485764719 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540714755995 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850941631013 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152876821182 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113890300686 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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