The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Humans arriving up to these days have been changing themselves, updating themselves in several aspects. They have changed their demeanour apropos to agricultural skills as well as in industrialisation realms, finally arrived to these modern life style with academic alongside. And I strongly agree with the statement that rules made by societies with expectation to be followed by young people are strict with several reasons which are the cause why societies has rendered a significant stride in overall development remarkably fast.
For the first reason, the rules made by leaders of society are imperiously unsparing, applicably fitted and perfect enough to keep every components balanced, as there is a need to keep the society peace and harmonious. For instance, laws which are placed with a reason of growing negative components in society has not only admonished youngster but also enabled to restrain them in correct track. Doesn't the rule edited in Arabian country has guaranteed the safety of young ladies in pragmatic life? Doesn't the rule made in wide road country or inside the train has bolstered in reducing road accidents? One can not deny that rule installed in the country hasn't taught people to make them a disciplined and civilised person.
For the second reason, rules being amended nuance by nuance are strict as per the need of developing world, as the need for maintaining the fortitude to tackle difficulties in unprecedented imminent days. For instance, rules we can feel in academic temples and universities are utter mostly exquisite in a sense that students are tracked to study hard in their examinations. Once they learn in their theoretical and practical assessments, it has deluge chances to create job opportunity to not only to elite group but also to bourgeois as well as to subordinate group. Moreover, when I was in grade 4, I started staying hostel where I was compelled to do all of my task by myself, like as washing clothes, polishing my shoes and even combing my hair which my mother used to do for me before. After then, I learned to cook and have regular exercise daily what taught me learn unexpectedly how to struggle in young life. I can state clearly with my experience that if the rule of hostel hadn't set tough, I wouldn't have learnt these so much.
In a nutshell, the rules being imposed by society upon the head and shoulder of the youngster are appropriately strict and demanding enough to make them stand in their on feet, fight for themselves in the competing world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, as to, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98581560284 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78514891417 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560283687943 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8317168077 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.6 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205544577277 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642734412732 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704385801709 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127266323957 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043630989435 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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