Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Historic buildings retain the history of cities. Many people want to keep and preserve these historic buildings. In my opinion, I would rather destroy them to build modern buildings for two reasons.
Firstly, modern buildings benefit people more than historic buildings do. As the increasing of population and development of technology, people demand more shelters, entertainment options, and foods. Therefore, people need modern buildings with shops, apartments and game centers to comfort human’s life. Moreover, some historic buildings have been recorded in a history book by picture and no longer be useful. For that reason, the government should replace some historic buildings with up-to-date buildings.
Secondly, historic buildings capable of many dangers. Historic buildings don’t have a stable structure due to exposing to natural factors in a long period of time. Hence, the buildings could fall down easily and injure tourists or could even cause death. In that case, all the damages and responsibilities would come to the government. As the result could cause arguments between government and citizens.
On the other hand, some modern buildings have a very precious and special structure that needed a lot of time to build in the past. Therefore, many people want to preserve those such buildings and think that destroying old buildings is an act of disrespect to our ancestors. However, technology now is at peak and old artistic buildings can be built just in a short amount of time.
To sum up, although some old buildings kept our ancestors’ effort, I still totally disagree to keep so much old buildings and support building modern buildings for its direct benefits to people's life and dangerous old buildings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Suggestion:
...ments between government and citizens. On the other hand, some modern buildings...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40875912409 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85690670572 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0964455346 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1764705882 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386178487441 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127275985258 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909519254675 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231064383524 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694353001272 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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