Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, subways)? Why?
Traveling and people transportation is one of the main issues that governments should deal with in every city or country because; it helps people from different parts of a region to connect with each other easily. Some experts suggested that states must expand their roads and highways for having a better transportation system. However, some others believe that public transportation infrastructures help city officials to manage the city accordingly. I think public transportation development can benefit us more effectively due to some reasons.
First, public transportations provide their consumers with a cheap and safe means of traveling which everybody from any class of society can use them without any concern about its cost. If you wanted to travel to another city with your own vehicle, it may cost you so much, since the price of gasoline and car insurances increased drastically. So, it would be very difficult for a person with a low-income to even buy or rent a car. Generally, Public transportations like buses or trains created a good and efficient system that could be used by every person.
Secondly, as we know these days environmental problems have turned into one the chief concerns of engineers and scientists, since the amount of green house gas emissions like carbon dioxide have been raised uncontrollably. Building highways and new roads just help the contractors to destroy more jungles and natural sites to create a way for humans to enter them easily and ruin the little fresh environments left for our children in the future. So, we will protect these sections by demanding our governments to build more public transportation systems.
Last but not least, expansion of public transportations have more possibilities to create a large number of job offers in any place hopefully. For example, my uncle Jim is an engineer who lost his job during economic depression period. But, when city council decided to rebuild and expand our cities train system and bus terminals not only he was offered a job but also his fellow coworkers who were unemployed found a new occupation by this project.
In conclusion, transportation and traveling system is a crucial matter that should be paid enough attention to execute the best strategy about their future. I believe that public systems may assist to settle the amount of pollutions and keeping our nature safe too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16195372751 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94827793263 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619537275064 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6631654818 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145273885713 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511743772908 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484471622551 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794930177236 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400058845698 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.