Should parents make decisions for their teenage children?
First of all, most parents have gained a lot of experience in their life and they would be pleasure to share this with their children. Also, they feel love for them, so they will always do their best for their offspring. Although parents are sometimes a little complicated and restrictive, they will try to do their jobs well and guide their boys for the right way. However, I believe that teenagers are people who can take their owns decision, but that decision should be talked and approved for their parents. So I think that teenagers should make decision with their parents’ advice and I would like to give two reason to explain me position.
First, teenagers can think and express their ideas like all of us, and therefore, they could make decisions about different topic. additionally, is important to highlight that teenagers’ thinking is influenced either by parents’ knowledge shared to their children and by environment, and I say environment because they interact with a lot of people throughout their life, such as friends, classmates, teachers, and so on. And knowledge of these people will be learned by the teenagers and it will be part of their thinking. It could happen that teenagers want to do something that a friend of their have made and, maybe it is not the best decision. For example, someone has driven a car without license and a teenager want to do the same, so in this case is important the advice from their parents to do the right.
Secondly, Young people usually take a lot of risk and don’t concern about the effect that their decision caused. For instance, a teenager wants to learn a use of shotgun and in this case is important the guidance form their parents, because this teenager, in a moment of angry, he/she would want to use it against another person.
Finally, I am sure that teenagers are able to make their own decision, but if we want that decisions will be their best is imperative their parent’s guidance, even though parents will make a mistake like all of us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67571880215 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498575498575 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.979603217 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.846153846 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 5.45110844103 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494652089845 0.236089414692 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194810110634 0.076458572812 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084177849798 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329540641473 0.150856017488 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120166785487 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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