should students wake up early in the morning ar not - tpo 59
It is widely acknowledged that the decisions made, regarding the childern and students can highly effect the future of the human kind.As there in no doubt that they are the people who are going to make our future. Since the time students are going to school can highly effect their life, policy makers should think deeply about this matter. While some people belive that going to school early in the morning can benefit the students, others stand at the other side of the continuum, holding the view that the disadvatages of waking up early, overweight its benefits. Personally speaking, I agree with this idea, and the reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that a good night sleep can greatly alter the rate of learning, let alone focus and the bahavior of people. Students are no exeption to this rule either. Therefore, if they sleep enough at the night they can learn better at the next day. Sine most of the students don't like to sleep early in the night, the good sleep can only be obtained by waking up later in the morning. To drive this notion home I will make an example. Recently I read an article, claimming that in the avarage bed time of students whom their schools begin at seven A.M in the morning, is six hours, which has been proved that is not enough.
Furthermore, having a meal accompanied by family members can strengten the connections in that household and reduce the stress rate of each individual. Since the attendance time for most adults is late in the morning, and the parents wake up with that standards, when the children have to go to school eary, most families can not manage to eat breakfast together. That lost breakfast time could have been a good place for the child to talk about her or his day, and get a little advice from her or his parents. The parents could have also benefited from talking to their child and each other as they need that communication too. it goes without saying that because of the busy scheduals of everyone there days, finding a common time to speak inside families can be hard. My personaly experience in s comppeling illustration of this matter. In my middle school the attendance time was seven A.M, Thus, I could not find the chance to talk to my parents in the morning as they were sleep that time, and that lack of intimecy hurt my emotions. But In the hight school the attendance time changed to nine A.M. Therefore, I could eat with my family members and it realy helped me to deal with my problems. If it was not for that morning chats, I would have come into so many more problems.
In conclusion, having mentioned the reasons and explanations above, I strongly believe that the attendace time for students should be later in the morning. Not only under this curcomstanses they can have a good sleep and learn more proficient the next day, BUt it also give them and their family a chance to eat a good breakfast to gether and chat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2450.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 531.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61393596987 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42410996759 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480225988701 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0837020395 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123608403775 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384999274645 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517836176543 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849287385905 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407804768315 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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