Some high school students are delaying college for a year in order to take a gap year where pursue other opportunities such as work or travel. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of gap years. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Each student is free to make his own choice whether to pursue higher education immediately after high school or to make ephemeral brake before applying to a university. In the following essay I will provide some avails and drawbacks of taking a gap year before entering bachelor degree or college.
To begin with, as a advantage of having a year free is that we can commence a job and being there full-time. Accordingly, that is the best way to earn some extra money for ourselves and use them for various purposes, such as buying clothes or nifty advanced devices and smartphones. My friend is compelling example of a person who had an year gap before entering college. After, we graduated high school together he mentioned that wants to start work for a while in order to earn additional money. Thus, he desired to travel abroad to visit breathtaking venues. He considered that moment as an ideal to fulfill his covets which he had possessed with for quite long time. One year later, he enrolled engineering college and bragged with a long vacation around Europe, in spite of missed academic year. If he had not left one year gap for work, he would have not saved enough money to travel in numerous places.
However, there is an limitation to leave an year gap and that is related to become lazy and lavish. No once can deny that a student's brain inure with school homework and assignment and has fresh abilities to remember more information productively and efficiently. Therefore, it would be definitely better to apply at a college immediately after high school graduation. Chances fulfill all admissions and pass the necessity exams are higher due to the freshness of the mind. For example, other friend of mine who also decided to take an year rest form long study at secondary school. After graduation, he went to his hometown to be with all family members and after an year he wanted to apply for higher education. However, when the time came he procrastinated for a little longer because he had felt lazy and tedious form studying materials. Every time when he defers, he is inclined to lose freshness of his mind and eventually become unable to persuade higher education. Furthermore, the academic information has been changing with rapid pace due to constant development and presence of copious contemporary majors and subjects.
To sum up, there are definitely pros and cons of leaving an year gap before entering college. Students might get lazy if wait, or they would have free time to start work and make money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83179723502 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65471488036 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541474654378 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6971801245 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268709832784 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835393686497 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594415083134 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170707098043 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494870941223 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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