Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students.
Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these
views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that academic education in high level should have been constrain to only prosperous students.contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that university education should have been free for everyone. However, I am inclined to believe that the focus of the government on only talented students are very helpful to society.
First and foremost, the more investment of governments on educational issues has adverse effects on society. The economic recession is one of these problems. If the noticeable percent of national budget be considered on educational issues, governments could not provide a career opportunity for a large number of graduate students, this inefficiency of government increases corruption in the society and also advancement in the country postponed. In most of the times, successful people in the universities have the best background in the low level of their education such as high school . Usually, the core interests of people emerges in the childhood and if the investment of government is accurate, country develops in all aspects.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that, unfortunately, most of the families believe that the success of their children obtains in the university. If this epidemic belief effect on government and this condition influence the plan of government in dividing budget, absolutely consequence of this plan risk the future of the country because there are not any indisputable reason for this investment. As all know, enhancing of the students in high-level education decreases the quality of education so university education of only good students is very useful and efficient for society and people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'constrained'.
Suggestion: constrained
...ducation in high level should have been constrain to only prosperous students.contrary to...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ld not provide a career opportunity for a large number of graduate students, this inefficiency of...
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Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...l of their education such as high school . Usually, the core interests of people e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45925925926 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09855454863 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0456895244 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.4 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221291465448 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815443887379 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582497956786 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158603992491 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276112203606 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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