Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have done a lot of things since we have found a life on this planet. I firmly believe that humans have greatly helped to become it is better to place to live. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, since the medieval century, people have invented a great number of things such as electricity and technology even the computer which numerously aids to live with more ease. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by own experience. I was born in high- tech century which has plenty of utilization that makes my life happier. I do not have to worry about heat and food like in the earlier times. Thanks to those great inventions, now I can spend more time with my family and friends because everything is abundant and even more advanced. In primitive times, humans spent most of their time to forage food and shelters; however, today the only thing we can concern its own happiness. Additionally, more and more things are inventing, we are becoming more genius and knowledgeable than ever before. It goes without saying that if I were not born on this planet, I would not live happy as today’s me.
On top this, thanks to the human’s efforts to make this planet a better place, we are the only species that can concern for others such as preserving extinct animals and even protect some areas. Drawing from my own experience, when I was a little girl, I really loved to watch documentary movies about nature. I have deeply known that sometimes nature is so brutal for animals and plants even people such as Ice Ages and Tsunamis. However, if people do something for protecting them from these natural disasters, this planet will become a more convenient place to live for even plants and animals. As a result, I decided to become an environmental specialist to preserve a lot of faunas and floras from the danger of extinction. If I was not convinced that humans can contribute to this planet to become a better place, I would not major in this area and would not share my life with such beautiful creatures.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that individuals have greatly influenced on this planet to become a more comfortable and pleasant place. This is because people have invented a large number of useful things to help others to live with more ease and this is because they can save a lot of animals’ and plants’ lives from terrible disaster and misfortunes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...utilization that makes my life happier. I do not have to worry about heat and foo...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...e. This is because people have invented a large number of useful things to help others to live wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, as to, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69634703196 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63275966397 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490867579909 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2008134694 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.263157895 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0526315789 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117950901975 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428424647972 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493585924536 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089040576954 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278142181342 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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