Some people believe that money should be prioritized over time ?Do you agree or disagree ?Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Our life revolves mainly around the two things as mentioned by the author,money and time , while mostly there are more people who favour the former rather than the latter. In my opinion, time should be prioritized over money as eventually time is comparatively more valuable than money. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with,as it is rightly said that “Time and Tide waits for none” , time once gone can never be relived again as opposed to money which comes and goes.No amount of money is equivalent to the amount of time wasted.People run behind money and tend to forget the valuable time lost in order to achieve their goals.For instance , a person living in India with a decent job gets a better opportunity to work in US with higher pay ,and the person grabs this opportunity without looking back at time he would compromise with his family and relatives.Eventually the person realizes that he should have spend more time with his closed ones when it was possible as opposed to pursuing his greed of earning more money.
Secondly, the ambition of earning more money sometimes has detrimental effects on our health. As a person succeeds in his/her career his ambition grows and makes him work even harder than before without thinking about the effect it has on their well being. As there are many rich people who suffer from a myriad of diseases as they do not have enough spare time to relax.Moreover what good is money if we do not have the time to utilize it .For instance , a rich person who works continuously might eventually develop a terminal illness and then even though he has all the money in the world but has no time to utilize it.
In conclusion, a person who values time over money tends to be more satisfied and happy in life .As it is said that time is money , time is the most important currency which a person should possess.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68047337278 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56049386328 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547337278107 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.522403674 48.9658058833 410% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.75 100.406767564 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.25 20.6045352989 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.375 5.45110844103 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215369781703 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10894069904 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994024889121 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156438002614 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417634036914 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 11.7677419355 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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