Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Other believes that classes should be optional for students. Which points of view do you agree?
universities are important for young people to get their final education in order to participate in building their country. students can learn a vast majority of technical since that will allow them to select their carrier in the future. different teaching strategies applied in college, Some believe that students should attend classes to gain a maximum benefit, other people prefer the availability of student to be optional. Personally, I believe that students should be present in all classes. I feel this way for two important reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, students will get more information during their practical participation. when students available at university attending different sessions, they will get a lot of information from the professor that is not written in a book. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember when I was studying for a master degree in Egypt, The professor insist on all students to attend his clinical operations that were done in the hospital. he knows that students will be oral surgeons in the future. Hence, they need to participate in performing all surgical operations under his supervision. in addition he provided us with more important clinical tips. As a result, after we had been graduated from the Oral and Maxillofacial Department, All of us were able to do any surgical operation independently. As you can see, the availability of students very important to improve their knowledge.
Furthermore, It maximizes and widens friendship between classmates which will have a positive impact in the future career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, so, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32270916335 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9763974384 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0587022598 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0666666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259370312878 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082656700165 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109924213444 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158984432038 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13833035107 0.0645574589148 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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