Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently, while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
As time passes and people become more developed, they become more aware of the importance of nutritional value in physical and mental health. In such a sophisticated world where we are living, people have various eating habits for example some people are vegetarian, some people like red meat, and some people like fast foods such as pizza and hamburgers. The controversial question which arises here is whether people should eat their meals at restaurants or at home. I personally content that eating and cooking meals at home have diverse positive impact on people's lives. In what follows, two elaborate reasons will vindicate my standpoints.
First of all, although prepared foods and fast foods take less energy and time for people who eat them, they are not healthy and suitable for physical and mental health. it is crystal clear that people are more busy with their tasks, responsibilities and obligations in today’s, and they prefer to have their meals in restaurants especially whose menus have a profuse amount of foods for diverse tastes . Despite of the fact that restaurants are controlled by related authorities in terms of health and hygiene, there is not any warranty about being healthy and fresh concerning their ingredients or even the environmental of the restaurants. sometimes, restaurants utilize multi-used oil or expired ingredients in the process of making foods which they have a destructive impact on individual's healthy or even it causes a irreparable damage in people's healthy for example heart attack, blood pressure and poisoning and so forth. As a result, it is beneficial that people do not go to the restaurant or at least limit themselves to go to the certain restaurant which consider the principals of hygiene.
Not only could individuals be gotten sick by eating harmful foods in restaurants, they could but also be limited at restaurant. actually, there is not lots of space in a given restaurant, most of restaurants notice people that do not spent a lot of time in restaurant after eating their meals. In this situation, people have to eat their foods as fast as possible or even they have to pay more tax for the extra time. As a result, it could cause more stress and tension on customers. On the other hand, at houses people could spend a lot of time during eating foods or cooking foods, and they could get together and create memorable and enjoyable time with each other without any limitation or any expense. For example, my mother love cooking, and it is a kind of hubby of her. She sometimes invite her friend for dinner, and cook a wide veriety of delicious foods, cake, and dessert. Her friend come to our home and talk about various issues. actually, not only do they enjoy eating different foods, they but also do many activities which they could not do in the restaurants such as dancing, watching movie, talking about past memories and so forth which they do not require tax or additional expenses.
All in all, people have diverse choices when they want to eat their meals; they can cook their meals at home or go to restaurant and eat prepared foods. although each of these two options has its own advantageous, cooking foods at home can have more benefits. people either can prepare fresh and healthy foods for themselves, or they can prepare food in what way they want. Moreover, by cooking food at home, people can create memorable and enjoyable time for themselves during cooking and eating at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, so, at least, for example, kind of, such as, talking about, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 41.0 13.8261648746 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2888.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 587.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9199318569 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66210302959 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453151618399 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 890.1 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3933152961 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.565217391 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5217391304 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34782608696 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324975689559 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10208378941 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904217130413 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221463463046 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593724011172 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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