Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer?
I prefer trying new things and taking risks as opposed to sticking to doing things that I am already good at. Everyone's preference would be different depending on factors such as their risk appetite and risk tolerance. Although I am not much of a risk-taker myself, I understand the importance of learning new skills, especially since we live in a fast-paced and ever-changing world.
The biggest reason why I wish to experience new things is so that I can be prepared for the future. For example, new technology is being introduced everyday and is quickly changing the workplace. People are expected to be computer-savvy now more than ever before. With the disruption that new technology, such as AI and 3D-printing is bringing into the industry, it is important that we equip ourselves with skills that will enable us to secure our jobs in the future. For this reason, I have been studying courses, such as data analysis and coding, alongside university ever since I completed high school.
Independence is another reason for trying new experiences. For instance, at the moment I do not know how to drive and depend on others to take me to my destinations, such as the grocery store. This arrangement has its own problems. If the person is busy, I would have to wait until they are available, which can cause delays and also annoy the person if I constantly ask them to drive me somewhere. Although I am too afraid to sit behind the wheel, I know I need to learn how to drive if I wish to be more independent. This is why I have reluctantly decided to attend a driving school as soon as possible
Lastly, I believe that by giving ourselves the chance to attempt new things, we provide ourselves with the opportunity to find areas we are good at. For instance, a person who is good at painting may only want to stick to painting traditionally, i.e. using paints, water/oil and paintbrushes. The idea of digitally creating art may not be appealing to them. However, if they attempt to use technology to create their art, they may realize that they are good at it and may experiment with new techniques and styles as well.
To sum up, I believe in taking risks and trying activities that we are unfamiliar with. Who knows what we might uncover? We may find a new hobby or a skill we did not know we had the potential to be good at. It also allows us to be more self-sufficient and might allow us to stay up-to-date with the constantly changing world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ple, new technology is being introduced everyday and is quickly changing the workplace. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, may, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64678899083 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83236358503 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51376146789 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0243817047 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4761904762 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194232339934 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581114598341 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835721417825 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106510718923 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818413472663 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.