Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is changing quickly every day. Technology is also developing very fast. I believe that technological development is the most important development which has a great effect on our lives. People use this advanced technology to complete their work. Some people like do work by hand, others like to do by machine. Like and dislike vary from person to person. I prefer to do work by machine. I feel in this way because of the two reasons, which I will explain in following essay.
First of all, machine work is fast. Our lives obviously changed due to machine. Nowadays most of the people prefer to do work by using machine. Machine work is faster, quicker, easier, neater. Nowadays, for each and every field people are using machines like farm, Industry, factories, cities. For instance, In kitchen there are machine for vegetables, fruits cutting, oven, Micro-wave, dish washer, Roti maker, Mixer all these machines are helpful to make food as early as possible and it saves man time and required less efforts. We can cut vegetables by machines within in 5 minutes whereas manually cutting vegetables will take 1 hour. Which means machines are saves our time as well work.
Secondly, Nowadays, many works are done by machine in Industries. Hence many big industries are replacing machine instead of man. Which requires less human efforts and accuracy in work in quicker way. In hand work people get tired, frustrated, inaccuracy in work, lots of time taking but in machine never tired, frustrate can carry out the same work in long time. While, people trying to work more, might even get damage which becomes too expensive to cure. In addition, producer can regulate the rate of production and the speed of accomplishment by machines. Therefore, everything is controllable, economical using various machines.
In addition, machines make our life easy and comfortable. Devices like computer, Xerox machines, scanner are machines which are very useful in our daily office work. In early days, people used to do all work by hand. For example, my grandpa used to do all paper work in his office but nowadays all paper work done by computer, we hardly do paper work.
In conclusion, many people like to do their work by hand for self satisfaction, to keep them in busy, relaxes. But, I believe, machine saves our time and energy, then why should we waste our time and energy by doing some work by hand?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'machines'?
Suggestion: machines
...ies. For instance, In kitchen there are machine for vegetables, fruits cutting, oven, M...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ible and it saves man time and required less efforts. We can cut vegetables by machi...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...orks are done by machine in Industries. Hence many big industries are replacing machi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93611793612 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56263118334 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538083538084 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0183455431 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.275862069 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0344827586 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68965517241 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395561882131 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118525132792 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1157380985 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245202849571 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514446049877 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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