Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made it easier for people to connect on a deeper level. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology is changing rapidly. Most people are using modern technology to do various activities. Life has become easier and enjoyable. I personally believe technology has made it easier to connect. I feel this way because of two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, accessing massive amounts of information on the internet is simple, technology continues to benefit us day in, day out. It is true that technology is an important part of our daily lives. For example, Nowadays, we can browse the internet from anywhere and anytime. We can use the internet to find out any location, information about specific areas, food recipes, any subject information,etc.
Secondly, most of the people have computers,laptops,tablets and smartphones. These devices have made communication easier. These devices made life more enjoyable. Availability of smartphones made it inexpensive through which uneducated people can afford and operate it.Hence making it comfortable for people connecting to one another. For instance, my parents always communicate with my brother who resides in the United states of America frequently on WhatsApp or Facebook messenger video call. In this way technology upgrades the relationship among people instead of complete loss. Also, technology improves the transportation system. Unlike in the past, when it is demanding to convey people by using horses. However, improvement arrives with progress in technology by using modern transportation techniques thereby making life more enjoyable and comfortable.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that technology has made life easier for people by promoting use of the internet, technology devices and the easiest means of transportation available now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62641509434 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3174812339 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6749729637 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4736842105 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274349726396 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833371771354 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580115711519 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176062260744 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640456474703 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.78 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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