Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.
Some people like to live in the same house, have the same job and habits all their lives. However, others aspire to changes and new experience. Likes and dislikes vary from person to person. I feel in this way because of the two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, change is necessary in our life. By adapting ourselves to different changes, we can make our life more exciting, entertaining and increase our knowledge. Change gives us relief and our own satisfaction. It is obvious that life would not be as fun as now without changes. Feeling dull with something that you are doing constantly would affect your mental health. For instance, One of my friends has almost 10 years for I.T. experience but she always tries to learn new programming languages which makes her updated on her field.
Secondly, some people keep on doing the same things repeatedly. This may cause depression, feeling bored of the work they are doing and eventually they lose interest in the task they are doing which may lead to mistakes. One of my friends was a typist. She was in that profession for almost 5 years. Initially it was fine, but as the time went by she lost all his interest in typing and ended up with lots of typing mistakes in documents she typed. She changed her profession upon my suggestion and she is very happy now.
Finally, we get an experience from changes and it increases our knowledge. We can learn many things by having new experiences. New experiences are important for our improvement too.
In conclusion, based on my experiences, I strongly believe that change is necessary for everyone for an interesting and challenging life. Change is always a very important concept in human life. It will be also important in the future. People who believe the necessities of the change in their life will be successful. Others will lose.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...dly. This may cause depression, feeling bored of the work they are doing and eventually ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79076923077 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6465008717 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556923076923 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9835903841 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.875 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5416666667 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283383746142 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073717061192 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636801665842 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151198059342 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584251546563 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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