Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.
Some people prefer a stable life as they can take control of everything in their life, while others believe that changeable life is better because they can't remain unchanged. There are several advantages and disadvantages to each side of these two different lifestyles, and there is no absolute best choice. However, in my opinion, I prefer to change rather than stability, and the following paragraphs elaborate on three reasons for my point.
First of all, I tend to feel tired of something, new experiences help me to stay enthusiastic about my life. It's difficult for me to live a stable life, and I couldn't imagine doing the same things every day. In addition to the emotional factor, research shows that changes in daily life help our brains more flexible and is good for memory. All of these benefits can't be found in a stable life.
Secondly, there is nothing more certain and unchanging than uncertainty and change. Everything changes every day, so it isn't possible to look forward to stability forever. Embracing the uncertainty in our life makes ourselves well prepared for the future, no matter it's good or not. I have observed a phenomenon from all my family and friends around me that the people looking forward to the variety of life are more optimistic than those who are not, therefore they are more happier and healthier.
Third, as the technology develops in an exponential way, keeping stable might not be a wise choice for all the people in this world. Dozens of years ago, You might be able to learn only one skill as your job all your life, but it's getting harder now. The study indicates that 50% of jobs will be gone in 10 years. More and more jobs have been replaced by robots, and it's hard to guarantee that we can do the same job for a lifetime.
In conclusion, living a changeable life makes people more prepared for an uncertain future, and it is beneficial for our emotional and physical health. A stable life might not be bad but I like the changeable life better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
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Message: Consider replacing "in an exponential way" with adverb for "exponential"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72364672365 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55794448874 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558404558405 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8313051754 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5294117647 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20972592825 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637698228028 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524034032319 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117050112174 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516381243346 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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