Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave Do you agree or disagree Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer

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Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave.

Do you agree or disagree? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer

In my opinion, movies and television shows do influence how people behave.I feel this way for below reasons, which i will explain in the following essay.

First of all,movies and television makes people lazy when they are watching television. The main character of the movie has a strong personality and younger want to copy the same character. For example, when I was in college,I used to watch Bollywood movies.I used to wear dresses like my favorite actress.In this way Bollywood actresses had an influence on my life.

Secondly, humans have a tendency to copy other cultures. Nowadays we can watch other countries news,serials and movies that contain their cultural information.Then we want to celebrate all these festivals.Nowadays most of the foreigners are celebrating diwali festival (Indian festival).For example,halloween is now celebrated all over the world.All these happening because of movies and television. This demonstrates the effect of movies and television on human life.

Movies and television shows give false expectations about the viewer's life.Many movies show teenagers college life and these movies make the teenagers believe that they will have the best time of their lives at college and will be able to pass without doing any hard work.

However,movies can also have a good impact on a person.It can teach them to be kind,rituals,culture. When a child sees their favourite serials and actors doing something good, they will also try to be like his role model. For example, 7 year old boy helped blind man cross the road. When asked how he learnt it,he said that he saw it in serial.

All of these reasons, I believe movies and television have a lot of influence on society. Movies and television effects positively and negatively but how the movie lover learns from them is up to the person.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i feel, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1610738255 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06075589625 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8002071123 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188179396117 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705456845101 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545013989068 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112297765377 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573680680524 0.0645574589148 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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