People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university?
University is not a new word. Nowadays, many people prefer to go to university after higher school for education. People prefer to attend college for career preparation, knowledge. I feel this way because of two reasons, I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, Many people attend university after higher school for good knowledge and experience. Attending university's lecture gives you theoretical as well as practical knowledge. Practical knowledge is more important than theoretical. Will get theoretical knowledge by attending online classes or reading books but for practical knowledge you need to attend college. Knowledge learned at university , we will have a deep understanding of our society. A systematic study in a college enables us to realize how the society works and how to deal with certain problems in a more skillful way and more efficiently.
Secondly, many people go to university or college to prepare for a career. Career training is becoming more important nowadays to young people compared to old people. At college, students learn many skills for their career and they intern to internship with a lot of chances. a university education usually makes it possible to get a decent job. It makes possible good career paths by giving the right direction to career. It is not easy to get a good job but after four years of study, it is not difficult for us to find a good job. Obviously, a university education gives you a degree as well as a decent job.
Moreover, Knowledge is power and we can help others in a better way. If we put what we have learned at a university in our practice. University education enhances our skills. Will those, we are more capable to help others.
In conclusion I am of the opinion that people attend university for a degree, new experience, knowledge, career preparation and help others better. All of these are due to the knowledge learned at a university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00308641975 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89574264115 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487654320988 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0229502216 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4782608696 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0869565217 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355325817603 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113558293873 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114434983809 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214046199172 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949339779096 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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