Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Money is the most important part in our lives. We cannot buy anything without having money. It is always better to save your money for future need, emergencies, etc. instead of use it in immediate enjoyment. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explain in following essay.
First of all, nowadays for every reason we need to spend money. Without money life is crucial. People should always save their money for future need, emergencies. For example, As a student, many students are staying far from their home. In case any emergency we can use saving money. Emergency can be anything like accident. In such cases instead of asking money help from other it is always better to have saving with you. On the other hand, if I do not have any savings, then I might have to face many problems.
Secondly, many people lose their job due to several reasons but before getting another job savings helps them in that time.
Saving helps in future. It allows people to be relaxed and enjoy life without worries Savings does not waste; if we could not use that our savings; we could help others, those who are in need of it. For instances, we can donate our money to needy people who lost their houses, properties, etc.
For working people, we should spend money within the limit budget. While we are young, we should spend money to buy experience and happiness some time. Because money is the important tool for opportunity and advancement, so spending it wisely is the best solution to happiness life. For example, I enjoyed traveling to good restaurants and spend a lot of money trying a new kind of food. That moment brought happiness to me. It not only exploring new place, but I also enjoy traveling and experiencing new things with friends. Today I don't frequently travel as before but the experience from exploring new things with the money that I earn teaches me to view the world in a different way.
In conclusion, spending money wisely to buy experience not a stuff and limit spending to save for the next chapter of life. some people spend their whole life in making money only; some spend in enjoyment only, both are not good. I believe, maintaining balance between both is essential, because enjoyment is also important to keep ourselves active, relax, and fresh. But, there should be limitations. We should keep track for our expenditure and savings. This helps us to reduce our expenses and increase our savings. Hence, we should save some money for emergency and for future, instead of spending it immediately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76870748299 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45431098526 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480725623583 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6944593742 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8387096774 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2258064516 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96774193548 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290059382791 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807622135079 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786803626161 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153582546683 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692258016482 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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