Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures andother information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create suchrecords.
Which approach do you prefer,and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To begin with, by documenting our lives on social media, we create memories to be savored in the future. It is not uncommonthat no matter how much we enjoyed a certain experience, such as sauntering with a poetic heart along a quiet river on amidsummer night, skydiving from 15,000 feet above on a clear day, watching our kid take his first steps, to name just a few,thehustle and bustle of modern life will invariably make us forget everything except our current needs or those of our family.Nevertheless, each text or video we post and each photo or song we share on social media will bring us back to the past andhelp us relive that lost moment in time. They will remind us of our tender feelings and inner thoughts, our regrets and glory, ourhope and courage. Thus, disappointed in life as we sometimes may be, we will obtain much encouragement from those preciousmemories stored in social-networking sites, and realize once again that no matter what life brings, it is after all worth living.
What is more, sharing our experiences online is conducive to our interpersonal relationship. For one thing, we all have friendswho were once dear to us yet vanished from our life once they moved away either because of work or marriage, which issomething of a regret. Yet by sharing our life on social media where we can tag any friend by mentioning them in a post orcomment, we can get those long-lost friends engaged and manage to stay in contact with them even though we no longer seethem on a regular basis. Besides, displaying our life online can also help us start new friendships. In this day and age, apart frominteracting with existing friends on social media, we are also constantly on the lookout for kindred spirits, those that interest usand those whom we can relate to. For instance, a food lover will easily be attracted by one who always shares quality videos onhow to cook homemade food online. Once such interest is kindled, a new friendship is not far away as wecan communicatereadily with our “idol” with the convenience provided by social networking sites.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thehustle
...take his first steps, to name just a few,thehustle and bustle of modern life will invariab...
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Line 1, column 494, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...ur current needs or those of our family.Nevertheless, each text or video we post and each ph...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, after all, apart from, for instance, such as, for one thing, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83473389356 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94671746962 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59943977591 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.828445332 48.9658058833 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.909090909 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4545454545 20.6045352989 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 5.45110844103 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0342467169897 0.236089414692 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0179175687833 0.076458572812 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.015826649969 0.0737576698707 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0294420173 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00148533348711 0.0645574589148 2% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.